When a group of high school friends in the 1980’s, who spend their afternoons making home videos of them wrestling each other, come to the attention of a famous wrestler who offers them a television spot, friendships are tested, and they find out who’s really in it for the love of the sport.

    Mentor Posted on November 20, 2017 in Sports.
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      This needs to be cut down.

      In the 80’s, a group of young friends are recruited by a popular Wrestler to star in a series of commercials that will test their true friendship.

      Summitry Answered on November 21, 2017.
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        Testing their friendship isn’t really a goal.

        Is there a lead character and does he have a goal?

        Singularity Answered on November 21, 2017.

        Agreed, it needs to be something different.

        on November 21, 2017.
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          Is there any need to state it’s set in the 80’s? It doesn’t seem to have an impact or inlfuence on the premise and it takes up precious word real estate. The core idea has promise though.

          Samurai Answered on November 21, 2017.
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            As Richieve wrote, what is their objective goal and who is the main character?

            I’ll add that the inciting incident isn’t clear, was it the offer to star in the TV spot? Or was it something else that happened after they got the gig?

            Singularity Answered on November 21, 2017.
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              …and stakes are unclear/ vague..

              Best of luck.

              Samurai Answered on November 21, 2017.
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