Title: Saving Scroogetown
GabwriterPenpusher
When a hardnose PR exec is hired by a company to pitch the takeover of her financially-strapped former hometown – nicknamed for its law to not openly celebrate Christmas – she must grapple with her painful past, a city manager who wants to save the town’s independence, and whether she still believes in the spirit of the season.
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Dig it, but a company taking over a town? Is she an exec for a big-box store that seeks to take over their primary source of income?
Hi Odie,
No, she owns her own PR company and has been hired by a big industrial company to pitch the company’s new factory in town, to make it look good. Because the town is really destitute, the company looks to be the main employer. Thank you for the review, I very much appreciate it. Do you think I should word it a bit differently?
Sorry, this took so long.
Since you have a high concept title “Saving Scroogetown,” how about:
“A hard-nosed PR exec must overcome her painful past in order to land a new mega-factory deal in her misery hometown” PG-13 version.
OR
“A hard-nosed PR exec must win the hearts of her miserly hometown in order to land a new mega-factory deal” G/PG Version.
You get the idea, make this yours – take care.