When a man?s new world crashes down around him because his old world comes calling, he unleashes hell on everyone responsible ? starting at the bottom and working his way up.

small enquiry
1. what’s new world
2. what’s old world
3. what’s new world crashing down
4. what’s old world comes calling
5. what’s his unleashing hell on every one responsible
6. who is responsible
7. responsible for what
8. what’s at the bottom
9. what’s way up

Apart from that it reads just fine

PS. I appreciate your brevity, but if you had any real idea it would be much better…