When a man’s romantic attentions are ignored by a woman for many years he lures her into a secret meeting with a messenger who proposes an idyllic rendezvous.
So what’s the story? This sounds like two or three scenes out of a more complete narrative. Also, who’s the protagonist? The creepy stalker who sends someone else to the woman he likes so he can trick her into meeting him? Not exactly sympathetic there.
He battles with the daughter? Like they have swordfights? What does the daughter have to do with anything? This makes it sound like she’s the focus of the story, about a guy who just can’t get it through his head some woman isn’t interested in him…so again, what is is this about?