Deepak SurendarPenpusher Asked: December 25, 20192019-12-25T13:22:06+10:00 2019-12-25T13:22:06+10:00In: ComedyWhen a misogynistic Indian husband loses his IT job, he is forced to work in a team reporting to his wife in her organisation, to pay for mortgage.– ShareFacebook3 ReviewsVotedOldestRecentRichiev 64 Loglines 3,608 Reviews 310 Best Reviews 82,191 Points View ProfileBest Answer Richiev Singularity 2019-12-25T16:54:19+10:00Added an answer on December 25, 2019 at 4:54 pm I like the built-in conflict based on the lead character’s personality.You can drop, “Due to recession,” if you want to tighten the logline a little, (Don’t drop it in the story, just the logline)Also if being forced to work for his wife causes the lead to have a goal I think that would help the logline.?0 Share ShareShare on FacebookShare on TwitterShare on LinkedInShare on WhatsAppScott Danzig 20 Loglines 89 Reviews 6 Best Reviews 2,039 Points View ProfileBest Answer Scott Danzig Samurai 2019-12-26T02:57:03+10:00Added an answer on December 26, 2019 at 2:57 am My initial thoughts are that you can tighten up the logline more, without losing much if anything:When a misogynistic IT worker loses his job, he is forced to work for his wife to pay the bills.Nothing else seems important.? The only thing is, while there is certainly some implied conflict there, I think there can be more building tension.? I’d suggest exploring ideas that make it seem like more is at stake for the man… maybe it’s a dream project, and he just needs to behave for a month.? Or maybe it’s more of a competition, where he’s going to sabotage his wife’s efficiency, so they realize he’s better and he maybe even gets his old job back.0 Share ShareShare on FacebookShare on TwitterShare on LinkedInShare on WhatsAppkpetrakis01 10 Loglines 28 Reviews 3 Best Reviews 891 Points View ProfileBest Answer kpetrakis01 Logliner 2019-12-27T09:50:37+10:00Added an answer on December 27, 2019 at 9:50 am One little thing that may add is to specify what his wife’s company is – for example – is it some sort of feminine manufacturing product, or cleaning service or something that would also conflict with his conception of being a man. Otherwise, sounds like a good idea.0 Share ShareShare on FacebookShare on TwitterShare on LinkedInShare on WhatsAppYou must login to add an answer. Username or email* Password* Remember Me! Forgot Password?