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LachieMPenpusher
Posted: September 23, 20222022-09-23T14:59:12+10:00 2022-09-23T14:59:12+10:00In: Short Film

When a promising young concert pianist is overlooked for a gifted new student, she must battle for the attention of her neglectful teacher to retain her top spot.

When a promising young concert pianist is overlooked for a gifted new student, she must battle for the attention of her neglectful teacher to retain her top spot.
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    1. BenGilani Logliner
      2022-09-23T16:47:07+10:00Added an answer on September 23, 2022 at 4:47 pm

      Hi LachieM,

      “To maintain her status, a promising young musician must fight for the attention of her negligent instructor, whose interest is turning towards a skillful new student.”

      I hope this helps
      Good Luck

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    2. Richiev Singularity
      2022-09-24T08:35:50+10:00Added an answer on September 24, 2022 at 8:35 am

      I like this premise, having been a musician in high school, I know how important it is for some players to want to be the first chair, or be seen as the top player.

      I think the goal is relatable whether the lead character wins or loses. Perhaps be a bit more specific in what ‘winning’ looks like.
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      “After a musical prodigy joins their symphony, a gifted concert pianist battles to win the coveted solo and keep her top spot.”

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