When a ruthless, undercover alien headhunter discovers, her goofy co-travel-guide-researcher is from the rivaling faction, they must secretly use their genuine budding friendship to outwit the mastermind set on pinning them against each other.(The Alien Guide To Bavaria – to be a youtube show)

    Jessie Samurai Asked 1 week ago in Comedy.

    So, yes, this needs help, please. 😁

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      What is their mission? And if they are from a rival faction why are they on a mission together?

      Richiev Singularity Reviewed 1 week ago.

      They shouldn’t be . As far as the protag is concerned, the travel guide researcher is an alter ego/secret identity. She’s just one of many assassins from her faction working for her government, taking out aliens posing for humans. She happens to be assigned to earth. Her buddy should have been a normal, oblivious human.

      I’m still undecided why “Mastermind” engineered for them to be using the same undercover identity and to happen to be teamed up. One thought is to start a war, but this may develop as the show progresses.

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        What are the stakes?  Why does it matter whether one side or the other wins ?  Win what?  What’s the overarching objective goal of the team of non-rivals?

        dpg Singularity Reviewed 7 days ago.

        Thank you! I think, I will really have to go back to the beginning of the story. I’ll be back with a logline for the pilot and those questions answered.

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          How “comedy”?

          variable Overlord Reviewed 7 days ago.

          In your “bumbling alien pollutes the timeline…..again” logline, comedy was implied. How is this one comic?

          Maybe you want the comedy to stem from how they “..secretly use their budding friendship to outwit the mastermind antagonist” but currently it doesn’t

          7 days ago.

          ???After discovering the ill will of his employers, an undercover alien must team up with his rival to outwit their master???

          7 days ago.

          Indeed. Going to shift gears between two modes. One, comedy, staring the alter egos: The like-able, goofy cover identities. Probably sticking with it for a few episodes. Making a real guide, featuring local businesses. A real online tour guide for around here. The other story is the alien headhunter, doing her thing. Fairly dark, but not overly gory… also zero budget, with volunteers, so yeah lol. Possibly sticking with revealing only one to the audience at first. Them discovering each other, perhaps season finale? Or even better, only one realizing what the other is, but playing along for now.

          7 days ago.

          Sounds fun for a TV Series. Loglining for the complete plot would be a real challenge (risking it sound ‘vague’), so maybe focus on each narrative chunk (or episode) independently…?

          7 days ago.

          Yes, thank you! That was an obstacle, I was really struggling with. Maybe I’ll focus on the “pilot” for now. (which, in this case, will be a couple of mini episodes)

          6 days ago.

          As a bit if a sidebar: I emailed you the synopsis for the audio drama, if you’re still happy to take a look.

          6 days ago.

          Cool. On it.

          6 days ago.

          Check out your mail 🙂

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