The logline lacks a clear objective goal and, it seems to me, a relationship that a movie audience might want to watch and root for.
Would appreciate your further comment on the modification below based on your review. Thanks!
“After a lovesick flight attendant and the wife of a doppelganger of a famous actor becomes pregnant by him, he sets out to convince them to share a home with him.”
By clicking "Sign up" you indicate that you have read and agree to the terms of service.