Leon DavisLogliner Asked: April 8, 20212021-04-08T08:48:59+10:00 2021-04-08T08:48:59+10:00In: RomanceWhen a socially inexperienced Papuan girl falls in love with a young recluse who acquires a fatal illness, she must convince him to abandon his western heritage and accept her native traditions to save his life.Which Doctor ShareFacebook3 ReviewsVotedOldestRecentOdie 4 Loglines 254 Reviews 26 Best Reviews 1,558 Points View Profile Odie Samurai 2021-04-10T00:55:12+10:00Added an answer on April 10, 2021 at 12:55 am This logline has come a long way, this is good stuff and love the title!0 Share ShareShare on FacebookShare on TwitterShare on LinkedInShare on WhatsAppPhilippe Le Miere 6 Loglines 31 Reviews 2 Best Reviews 423 Points View Profile Philippe Le Miere Logliner 2021-04-08T15:24:49+10:00Added an answer on April 8, 2021 at 3:24 pm Good logline structure.Audience is served one “socially inexperienced Papuan girl”, who experiences an inciting incident with one “young (male) recluse”. Love is the motivator driving this plot (and genre is Romance).So, in the style of ‘When Harry Met Sally…'(1989), what then is eternally keeping these lovers apart? For Sally and Harry it was timing (each seemed to be in another relationship when ever their lives crossed). Or, think Shakespeare and his beloved Romeo and Juliet! Two warring factions tearing their community apart.Here, in this story we are presented illness as the conflict, symbolized by Western medicine vs.native lore. Big idea, noble in spirit, but well, difficult to “visualize”.My empathy reaches out to the fatally ill boy – yet it’s clear our Papuan girl is the protagonist … What must she “do” (think verb/action) in order to save her beloved (other than sit by his bedside and have a long philosophical argument about Western vs native medicine)?Story may be aided by introducing a third “Villain” character. This character causes (deliberately or otherwise) the illness of the recluse boy, and my represent the antagonist of ‘native medicine’.1 Share ShareShare on FacebookShare on TwitterShare on LinkedInShare on WhatsAppLeon Davis 31 Loglines 56 Reviews 0 Best Reviews 958 Points View Profile Leon Davis Logliner 2021-04-09T08:45:08+10:00Replied to answer on April 9, 2021 at 8:45 am Thanks for your thoughts.0 Share ShareShare on FacebookShare on TwitterShare on LinkedInShare on WhatsAppYou must login to add an answer. Username or email* Password* Remember Me! Forgot Password?