When a wallflower is tired of being overlooked and underestimated, she sets out on a journey of self-discovery to come off the wall and out of her shell.
“A journey of self-discovery” is vague both in terms of action and goal. It can mean any one of 100,001 activities in pursuit of 100,001 goals. She could choose a journey of self-discovery that entails scaling El Capitan without her bare hands, no rope ( as in “Free Solo”) Or a journey of self-discovery with the objective goal of hiking the length of the Pacific Rim Trail (as in “Wild”). Or live for a summer in the Alaskan wilderness (as in “Into the Wild”).
Which one journey does she take toward a concrete objective goal for the subjective purpose of self-discovery? Exactly what does she do to come out of her shell? What is the visual for “journey of self-discovery”? What will that look like, how will that unfold on the screen?
The logline needs to be specific.