When a working class town is terrorised by an escaped killer, a married couple team up with the creepy new priest to stop who they believe might be the devil.

    Mentor Posted on November 14, 2019 in Horror.
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      Could lean this out…

      When a small town is terrorised by an escaped killer, a married couple teams up with the mysterious new priest – who urges the devil is among them.

      -I keep thinking “working class” and “small” is redundant somehow. Same with “married”. But they do conjure up the right images.

       

      Mentor Answered on November 14, 2019.
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        INTENTION: Stop the murders.

        OBSTACLE: It’s the devil.

        Some ideas…

        They team up with the creepy priest who during Act 1 continuously harasses the husband to “confess”.

        The priest who they are continuously unsure of is somehow killed during the midpoint.

        Also, I was thinking the Married Couple is “haunted by supernatural happenings” – so have more of a goal. More of a reason to go to the priest for an explanation.

         

        Mentor Answered on November 15, 2019.
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          When a small town is terrorised by an escaped killer, a married couple, haunted by supernatural happenings, team up with the creepy new priest – who urges the devil is among them.

          Mentor Answered on November 15, 2019.
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            A family man teams up with a priest to stop the ghost of a murderer – a man whose death he is responsible for, and who is bent on revenge.

            – My previous logline for this. Actually might be more of a plot point as opposed to logline.

            Mentor Answered on November 15, 2019.
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              Singularity Answered on November 15, 2019.

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              on November 15, 2019.

              I was responding to the original logline, but you posted a newer logline that answered my question so I deleted the post.

              on November 15, 2019.
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