When a young Australian Muslim girl loses her mother, her grief turns to an obsession with building robots, where she fights for the chance to win an International Robotics Championship and realise a dream her mother never could.

    Samurai Posted on July 27, 2019 in Drama.
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      Interesting premise.

      How does the fact that the girl is Muslim enter the story? Do her Muslim teachers discourage her from building human like robots because they believe it violates Islamic teachings? If so, bring that out in the logline. If, on the other hand, her being Muslim brings no conflict into the story, then you can leave it out.

      Also, I do not understand what the dream is her mother could never realize. Was she also building robots?

       

       

      Mentor Answered on July 27, 2019.
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        “After her mother dies, a young Muslim girl channels her grief into winning an international Robotics Championship in order to realize the dream her mother was forbidden to follow”

        Singularity Answered on July 27, 2019.
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          Loving it.

          Rock on, Gstar!!

          Samurai Answered on July 27, 2019.
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            An interesting character and situation.

            Would it be accurate to say that the story hook could be written as:

            An Australian Muslim teenager overcomes prejudice and her lack of a formal education to compete in an International Robotics Championship.

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            Singularity Answered on July 28, 2019.
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