When a young high-school aged minority attends a nationwide diversity conference, he must learn to confront the racist incidents from his past in order to come to terms what life is like as a minority in this country and his own place in it.      

    Penpusher Posted on December 30, 2019 in Coming of Age.
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      Racial discrimination is a vexing social problem, but this logline seems to take a shotgun approach in attacking it. A logline for a movie plot should be a rifle, aiming one bullet (dramatic action) at a specific target, the bulls eye of one objective goal.  What one, specific action toward one specific goal does the young man take to deal with one specific problem, here and NOW, in the PRESENT TENSE of the story world?

      Singularity Answered on December 30, 2019.

      I came along to offer very similar advice, this logline is simply too generic to be useful.

      on January 1, 2020.
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