When a young woman falls in love with a pet shop worker, she must escape her animal cult family.
We may need just a little more information about this, only because I am not sure what an animal cult family is, Do they worship animals? is it a metaphor? Does it mean they are extreme animal rights activists?
“When she falls for a dedicated pet shop worker, a cloistered teen must escape her animal cult family for if they find out, she will be sacrificed to a goat they worship named Magog.”
it sounds great a comedy about that, but the cult is a group of people who kill animals? or people who love animals? I don’t get it.
I think you should write the protagonist’s risk, for example: … She must escapes from her animal cult family before her animals are trapped.
(sorry for my english, It is not very good)