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giannisggeorgiouSamurai
Posted: September 24, 20182018-09-24T21:38:15+10:00 2018-09-24T21:38:15+10:00In: Comedy

When abducted because of his secret, a clumsy teenager with acidic semen must save himself and a porn actress from the set and crew of a deranged snuff film director.

When abducted because of his secret, a clumsy teenager with acidic semen must save himself and a porn actress from the set and crew of a deranged snuff film director.
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    1. Mike Pedley Singularity
      2018-09-24T23:50:52+10:00Added an answer on September 24, 2018 at 11:50 pm

      Sounds intriguing. What’s the arc for the protagonist? If the fact that he’s got acidic semen is the secret… how does the snuff film director know about it?

      I would maybe consider just trimming it down as I’m not sure you need to say “set and crew”. I could be swayed but, to me, “save himself and a porn actress from a deranged snuff film director” works just as well.

      Is this a short or a feature length? I’m not sure that, comedically or plot-wise, there’s enough to sustain 90mins+. I can’t help but think that once the first “acidic cum” joke is spent what else is there?

      I look forward to what comes next…

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    2. giannisggeorgiou Samurai
      2018-09-25T01:51:44+10:00Added an answer on September 25, 2018 at 1:51 am

      Version 1.1 (shorter):

      When abducted because of his secret, a withdrawn teenager with acidic semen must save himself and a porn actress from a deranged snuff film director.

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    3. Richiev Singularity
      2018-09-25T08:38:58+10:00Added an answer on September 25, 2018 at 8:38 am

      Possible title: Blow Hard (Sorry, couldn’t help it)

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    4. Neer Shelter Singularity
      2018-09-25T11:52:50+10:00Added an answer on September 25, 2018 at 11:52 am

      By acidic do you mean like the alien’s blood in Alien? Otherwise, it implies and uncomfortable experience for his co star but otherwise no big deal.

      If you’re trying to create a story about someone out of their depth in the porn world, Orgazmo would be a good reference – I’m not sure how long a withdrawn teenager could believably stay a fish out of water in porn.

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    5. Lucius Paisley Logliner
      2018-09-25T12:13:39+10:00Added an answer on September 25, 2018 at 12:13 pm

      The funniest thing about this is “withdrawn”.

      HA. Puns.

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