When abducted because of his secret, a clumsy teenager with acidic semen must save himself and a porn actress from the set and crew of a deranged snuff film director.
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When abducted because of his secret, a clumsy teenager with acidic semen must save himself and a porn actress from the set and crew of a deranged snuff film director.
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Sounds intriguing. What’s the arc for the protagonist? If the fact that he’s got acidic semen is the secret… how does the snuff film director know about it?
I would maybe consider just trimming it down as I’m not sure you need to say “set and crew”. I could be swayed but, to me, “save himself and a porn actress from a deranged snuff film director” works just as well.
Is this a short or a feature length? I’m not sure that, comedically or plot-wise, there’s enough to sustain 90mins+. I can’t help but think that once the first “acidic cum” joke is spent what else is there?
I look forward to what comes next…
Version 1.1 (shorter):
Possible title: Blow Hard (Sorry, couldn’t help it)
By acidic do you mean like the alien’s blood in Alien? Otherwise, it implies and uncomfortable experience for his co star but otherwise no big deal.
If you’re trying to create a story about someone out of their depth in the porn world, Orgazmo would be a good reference – I’m not sure how long a withdrawn teenager could believably stay a fish out of water in porn.
The funniest thing about this is “withdrawn”.
HA. Puns.