When a maniacal alien warlord invades Italy in the late 1400’s and kidnaps the parents of Leonardo Da Vinci, the Renaissance artist must race against time to save them and repel the powerful intergalactic threat with his unproven inventions. (NOTE: This is a rewrite of my previous logline).

dho1115 Logliner Asked on June 11, 2018 in Action.
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I think you have burried the story….

Leonardo DaVinci must use his …. to save his parents and humanity from a maniacal alien.

CraigDGriffiths Summitry Reviewed on June 12, 2018.

Agree.  The character Leonardo is the story hook.

on June 12, 2018.
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Since we know who Leonardo Da Vinci is, you don’t need to date this and that will save you some words.
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“When his parents are kidnapped by a maniacal alien bent on world domination, Leonard Da Vinci must bring his unproven, theoretical inventions to life in order to save them.”

Richiev Singularity Reviewed on June 11, 2018.
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Inspired by both versions (in 25 W…)

“When an alien overlord invades Italy in late 1400, young (Da) Vinci must defeat an intergalactic dictator with his unproven inventions to free his parents”

Good Luck dho1115!!

variable Overlord Reviewed on June 11, 2018.

“Young Vinci & his (Unproven) Inventions” sounds phenomenal for a kid’s TV Series…
Kindly give it a thought 🙂

on June 11, 2018.

Thanks 🙂 !

on July 1, 2018.
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You should give him a friendly alien; disguised as a human, as a sidekick (This alien would, of course, be Mona Lisa)

Richiev Singularity Reviewed on June 11, 2018.

😀 sounds ‘picture’ perfect

on June 11, 2018.

“Why’s her smile so mysterious…” could be the running joke between them!!

on June 11, 2018.

Hmmm… Mona Lisa turns out to be Leonardo’s alien side-kick. That would be a nice story twist 😉 !

on July 1, 2018.
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