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giannisggeorgiouSamurai
Posted: September 23, 20182018-09-23T02:13:05+10:00 2018-09-23T02:13:05+10:00In: Horror

When clues from his friend’s disappearance lead to a high-class restaurant, an old hobo must save him from becoming part of the menu.

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    1. Richiev Singularity
      2018-09-23T03:57:14+10:00Added an answer on September 23, 2018 at 3:57 am

      If I went to a high-class restaurant that served human flesh, I don’t think I would want to eat bum.

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    2. dpg Singularity
      2018-09-23T06:49:49+10:00Added an answer on September 23, 2018 at 6:49 am

      No one cares when homeless people start disappearing except a bag lady who follows clues to a popular new restaurant specializing in an exotic cuisine.

      (25 words)

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    3. Anette Logliner
      2018-09-23T08:27:21+10:00Added an answer on September 23, 2018 at 8:27 am

      Perhaps give the hobo a handicap such as being mentally unstable? A little unpredictable…

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    4. Neer Shelter Singularity
      2018-09-23T11:21:43+10:00Added an answer on September 23, 2018 at 11:21 am

      The inciting event needs to be more personal and direct . I would also consider changing this to comedy or black comedy – for some reason it feels better suited for yucks than screams.

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      When a homeless woman wakes up missing her husband outside of a three Michelen hat restaurants, she must? save him before he becomes a part of the menu.

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