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Posted: June 23, 20222022-06-23T06:53:26+10:00 2022-06-23T06:53:26+10:00In: Drama

When confronted with violence in his new home, the son of a buddhist monk must defend himself while still staying true to his beliefs

When confronted with violence in his new home, the son of a buddhist monk must defend himself while still staying true to his beliefs
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    1. Mark Penpusher
      2022-06-27T14:47:10+10:00Added an answer on June 27, 2022 at 2:47 pm

      Maybe do some research into the technicalities of Buddhism as a way to defeat the bully, maybe as a subversion of the traditional pacifist Buddhist, he defeats the bully with cunning instead of moralising.

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    2. julian finlay Penpusher
      2022-06-27T14:50:12+10:00Added an answer on June 27, 2022 at 2:50 pm

      Could you be more specific as to the violence he is confronted with, seems very vague. Same with in terms of defending himself. Very solid idea however, a difficult situation vs his belief. perhaps maybe say his “Pacifistic beliefs” adds more tension to the log line, two very opposites colliding together. You had the character, event and action, which is everything essential for a good log line. Good logline, but be a bit more specific

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    3. Sophie Vasic Penpusher
      2022-06-27T14:52:06+10:00Added an answer on June 27, 2022 at 2:52 pm

      Maybe add what started the violence or what the violent act was, as a specific event instead of just stating that he is confronted with violence in his new home.

      Besides that I really like the story! Really interesting on the first read.

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    4. Sophie Vasic Penpusher
      2022-06-27T14:52:42+10:00Added an answer on June 27, 2022 at 2:52 pm

      Maybe add what started the violence or what the violent act was, as a specific event instead of just stating that he is confronted with violence in his new home.

      Besides that I really like the story! Really interesting on the first read.

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    5. MartyDawes Penpusher
      2022-06-27T15:11:35+10:00Added an answer on June 27, 2022 at 3:11 pm

      When he is confronted with physical violence in his new home, the son of a buddhist monk must find a creative way to defend himself while staying true to his pacifist beliefs

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