When confronted with violence in his new home, the son of a buddhist monk must defend himself while still staying true to his beliefs
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When confronted with violence in his new home, the son of a buddhist monk must defend himself while still staying true to his beliefs
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Maybe do some research into the technicalities of Buddhism as a way to defeat the bully, maybe as a subversion of the traditional pacifist Buddhist, he defeats the bully with cunning instead of moralising.
Could you be more specific as to the violence he is confronted with, seems very vague. Same with in terms of defending himself. Very solid idea however, a difficult situation vs his belief. perhaps maybe say his “Pacifistic beliefs” adds more tension to the log line, two very opposites colliding together. You had the character, event and action, which is everything essential for a good log line. Good logline, but be a bit more specific
Maybe add what started the violence or what the violent act was, as a specific event instead of just stating that he is confronted with violence in his new home.
Besides that I really like the story! Really interesting on the first read.
Maybe add what started the violence or what the violent act was, as a specific event instead of just stating that he is confronted with violence in his new home.
Besides that I really like the story! Really interesting on the first read.
When he is confronted with physical violence in his new home, the son of a buddhist monk must find a creative way to defend himself while staying true to his pacifist beliefs