When he meets an exchange literature student, a shy politics nerd joins the university theater group together with her to win her heart before she leaves one month later.

    Samurai Posted on July 4, 2017 in Romance.

    Just a suggestion……

    When a stage fright, politics nerd falls in love with an exchange literature student, he realises he must give the performance of his life to stop her returning overseas.

    on July 11, 2017.
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      If he knows she’s going to leave, then why try to win her heart? I’m not familiar with all the details of exchange students, but has she been there a while or has she just arrived? Just asking because it seems unlikely she would only stay for a month. But anyway, wouldn’t a better goal be to get her to stay, or something?

      Anyway, to me, this logline is missing a strong hook. How many stories, non-romance included, have some guy who has  to  put himself in a strange situation and then he learns the lesson and changes and so he can get the girl? What makes your unique?

      Summitry Answered on July 4, 2017.

      Agree with Dkpough1.  It wants for a strong hook, a unique twist on the genre.

      on July 4, 2017.

      I rewrote the logline:

      When he meets an exchange student, a socially awkward nerd joins the university play to win the part of Romeo and have his first kiss ever  with his crush before she returns to her home country.

      on July 5, 2017.
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        “A nerd with paralyzing stage fright, joins the school play to win the part of Romeo and have one Kiss with his exchange student crush, Juliet before she returns to France.”

        Singularity Answered on July 4, 2017.
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          btw I like the concept, Just focus on the fact the lead has never been kissed, and if he succeeds his first kiss will be in front of the whole school and his friends and family. (The slow clap moment)

          (Your story needs a ‘Rick’  for it to work)

          Singularity Answered on July 4, 2017.

          Thank you for your comment!

          Something like that:

          When he meets an exchange student, a socially awkward nerd joins the university play to win the part of Romeo and have his first kiss ever  with his crush before she returns to her home country.

          on July 5, 2017.
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            When he meets an exchange student, a socially awkward nerd joins the university play to win the part of Romeo and have his first kiss ever with his crush before she returns to her home country.

            Samurai Answered on July 5, 2017.
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