etatsecondLogliner Posted: September 20, 20192019-09-20T05:02:36+10:00 2019-09-20T05:02:36+10:00In: DramaWhen he wins a basketball championship, a young man suffers an accident becoming paraplegic and must accept his new status in an adapted basketball club before falling into depression.– ShareFacebook1 ReviewVotedOldestRecentdpg 105 Loglines 5,555 Reviews 559 Best Reviews 111,939 Points View Profile dpg Singularity 2019-09-21T00:29:11+10:00Added an answer on September 21, 2019 at 12:29 am I think the logline needs to be clearer and more specific on some elements.“Basketball championship” and”Young man”: Is he a high school or college athlete?Did the accident occur during the championship game or afterwards?? And if the latter, what happened? Was he involved in an auto accident?? Or…?Film is a visual medium.? Ever plot element in a logline must be concrete, must map to something that can be seen on the? screen?? What’s the visual for “must accept”?? What is the concrete, screen event that will signal to the audience that he has “accepted his new status”?0 Share ShareShare on FacebookShare on TwitterShare on LinkedInShare on WhatsAppYou must login to can add an answer. Username or email* Password* Remember Me! Forgot Password?