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Mike PedleySingularity
Asked: December 12, 20192019-12-12T21:32:40+10:00 2019-12-12T21:32:40+10:00In: Drama

When he?s lost in the woods looking for his dog as a blizzard blows in, a despondent city-dweller must find a way back to his remote cabin before he freezes to death.

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    1. Richiev

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      2019-12-13T13:24:13+10:00Added an answer on December 13, 2019 at 1:24 pm

      “When he’s caught in a blizzard while searching the woods for his dog, a despondent city-dweller must fight his back to his cabin before the ferocious storm freezes him to death.”

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      2019-12-13T18:36:17+10:00Added an answer on December 13, 2019 at 6:36 pm

      I see a man in a snow storm stumbling from tree to tree looking for shelter. Maybe the storm is blinding and even the trees are hard to make out. Soon it will be dark and in a snow storm, the darkness is total. Without shelter, your MC will die within hours, so your film is almost real time.

      Is this your intention?

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      2019-12-13T22:51:20+10:00Added an answer on December 13, 2019 at 10:51 pm

      I am curious about the off screen backstory.? What’s a city dude doing in a remote cabin?? Is there a deeper cause to his despondency than the loss of his dog?? Is his walking around lost in the blizzard a metaphor for how he is lost in a blizzard of loss and failure in his life in general?? Will there be flashbacks to how he got lost in his personal life, ended up in the remote cabin?

      Oh, and could the he be a she?

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