Logliner
Posted: 2017-11-06T22:14:39+10:00 In:

When homicidal maniac escapes his cell in a locked-down mental health institution, greenhorn security guard must take a stand to survive and protect other patients.

When homicidal maniac escapes his cell in a locked-down mental health institution, greenhorn security guard must take a stand to survive and protect other patients.
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    1. Best Answer
      Logliner

      Hey JanCabal,

      Good job!
      Sounds really interesting, something for a low budget film with only a few locations.
      Will this be a short or a feature?
      I cannot make it better at the moment.

      Thanks!

      Aschwin

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    2. Best Answer
      Logliner

      Hello and thank you. Yes, low budget and as short film was exactly what I had on my mind =). Alsi a topic I know lot about as I work as a disability support worker and I oftwn work as a night shift duty with challenging behavior clients, those with schizophrenia included.

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      Singularity

      After a homicidal maniac escapes his cell in a locked-down mental health institution, a greenhorn security guard must fight for his life.
      (22 words)

      That he also fights to save others is?certainly part of the story, but I’m guessing he would be the primary focus of the maniac’s rage because of his position and uniform. Hence, the focus of the logline.

      That you’re writing from personal knowledge of the character type and the context is a plus.

      Best wishes with your project.

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