When Mrs. Claus walks out on Santa with four weeks to go, the workaholic chief elf must find a way to deliver Christmas on time with or without its figurehead.

    Summitry Posted on May 16, 2019 in Family.
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      “When Mrs. Claus runs off with the Easter Bunny, a workaholic elf has four weeks to help Santa snap out of his funk or deliver the children’s presents without him.”

      Singularity Answered on May 17, 2019.

      kinky!

      on May 18, 2019.
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        So… if the elf delivers the goods or gets Mr. C to — but Mr and Mrs remain estranged  — it’s a happy ending?  What is the real dramatic problem that must be solved here?

        Singularity Answered on May 18, 2019.

        There is definitely a disconnect between the inciting incident and the goal, for the reason you give and because Mrs. Claus leaving doesn’t actually prevent Santa from doing his job.

        on May 18, 2019.

        Yep, you’re right There is a disconnect. Dramatic problem is the delivery of Christmas, the head elf is the protagonist so I need to adjust the inciting incident to be seen from his perspective – as per Richiev’s. 

        on May 20, 2019.
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          Maybe this is more in the right direction

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          “When a depressed Santa refuses to get out of bed after Mrs. Claus leaves him, it’s up to a Christmaholic elf to make sure Christmas doesn’t fail.”

          Singularity Answered on May 18, 2019.
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