When she gets the approval for making her first film on the script she has stolen or adapted from the pages of a shredded diary from a dilapidated library, she finds out that whoever from the cast and crew finishes reading it dies mysteriously in the same manner as in the script and diary. The script is already circulated online to all and whoever reads the first line could not put it down until finishes it.
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When she gets the approval for making her first film on the script she has stolen or adapted from the pages of a shredded diary from a dilapidated library, she finds out that whoever from the cast and crew finishes reading it dies mysteriously in the same manner as in the script and diary. The script is already circulated online to all and whoever reads the first line could not put it down until finishes it.
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What’s the protagonist struggle? And what’s at stake? Making the Idea mor shorter will be better. But overall I am already impatient to read your development. Contact me mutual help.
I am not good at this stuff but…I was toying around with these ideas.
When a novice filmmaker uses a stolen script for her first project, the cast and crew fall prey to the same manner of death they’ve read; once she discovers it was someone’s diary she’s determined to find the author…
You get where I’m going? The logline needs a “to do” for the protagonist..what is she going to do about these murders? How do you plan to solve this mystery?
When a script seems capable of murder,
The curse of the murderous script
I have a to do idea but I am not too sure about it. Working on it.