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When the wise Chancellor of Thilikos – a matriarchal desert city,- dies unexpectedly, Indigo is thrust into the new role and must find a way to secure her country?s continued existence despite impending war, a global virus epidemic and rebellion by the Council and her citizens.
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It wold be be better to drop the names and concentrate on roles and traits.
E.g.:
When the ruler of a matriarchal desert city dies unexpectedly, [her daughter] must take over and secure her country?s continued existence despite impending war, a global virus epidemic and rebellion by the Council and her citizens.