Which one logline should I work on: Multiple Personality Malfunction, Boy becomes king, the youngest known president, girl vs gods, woman revenge for loss of her people, or volatile guy saves city? I leave it to you. P.S. The Train Demon Script is almost done, so until this is figured out, I’ll be working on that logline to get it ready. Thank you and i appreciate the help.

Samurai Posted on March 28, 2019 in Examples.
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I like the Boy becomes king premise

Kindly use ‘Public’ section for similar queries,
‘Examples’ is when you attempt for an existing film

Summitry Answered on March 28, 2019.
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“When she accidentally releases the god of death while excavating a newly discovered Egyptian pyramid, an archeology student must hunt down the lost dagger of Amon Ra if she’s to stop the angry deity and save humanity from being sucked into the underworld.”


Singularity Answered on March 28, 2019.

If I attempted the Girl vs Gods, It would be something similar to harry potter, but this one looks nice and has an interesting plot to it. Little wordy, but as the development continues, I could see it shortening out.
Very good all the same, Richiev.

on March 28, 2019.

If you want it more like Harry Potter. Maybe she releases the mythological deity on a school field trip.

on March 29, 2019.
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I like the idea of your ‘Goliath’ story, but you need to find a way to get rid of the unit’s guns.
I mean, if a sling and a stone can kill a giant, then so can a .45

However, if you can figure that out. (Maybe the modern military unit enters a world where technology doesn’t work) Then that would be a good one to work on as well.

Singularity Answered on March 28, 2019.
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