The Warriors of Light
Whole human beeing fight for the lost planet earth against the majestically, though, imperfect fallen angel.
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Hi Alexander,
It seems like you’re struggling with grammar and spelling. Make sure the logline is perfect in those areas.
Then, check out https://loglines.org/howto and you’ll be able to write a much improved next draft to the logline.
At this point I can recommend to limit your main character to one, rather than the entire human kind (which I believe you wanted to say).
Good luck!
Good advice Karel, I wan’t quite sure how to approach this one but you summed it up quite well.
When all of humanity fights for planet earth against an imperfect fallen angel…