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Asked: April 9, 20122012-04-09T04:31:17+10:00 2012-04-09T04:31:17+10:00

"With the help of Colchian Princess Medea, Astronaut Jason liberates the magical golden fleece from the planet Colchis in order to win the throne of his home planet Iolcus."

Jason and the Astronauts

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    1. [Deleted User]
      2012-04-10T10:59:07+10:00Added an answer on April 10, 2012 at 10:59 am

      Nice. A clear goal.

      But what are the obstacles? The stakes? Is there a character journey for Jason?

      Right now, the logline sounds clinical … and bit boring.

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