RE: An assassin with a split personality is hired to protect a client who, unknowingly, his other personality has been hired to kill.Penpusher Posted on September 14, 2019 in Action.
An instantly interesting logline with a lot of potential!
I’m interested to know more about the client- what are his/her reasons for being the target of the hit and why does he/she choose the protagonist to help protect them.
Agree with the above- what is the trigger for his changing of personalities? Is it in the call to adventure of the mid point reversal that we are introduced to the direct conflict between the personalities?
Consider me intrigued!
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RE: A guy asks 100 people “Which comedian is going to land on his feet and get his end away with an absolute cracker?” You said, “Les Dennis,” our survey said, “Ding, top answer!” Jammy bastard.
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RE: After he finds out the mysterious woman he spent the night with is his fiancee’s stepmother, a troubled playboy must navigate a weekend retreat filled with sexual tension and jealousy.
What genre are you going for here? I know it’s in the romance category but there is definitely potential for this to fit in a number of genres!
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