It’s the tail-end of the hair band era, but four friends from Jersey don’t know that yet, and their band is riding the wave of a surprise hit single. All that stands between them and their dreams of gold and platinum are a cross-country road-trip to L.A., strange venues, hostile audiences, and a label suit with an axe to grind, hellbent on seeing them fail.

Question 1

It’s the tail-end of the hair band era, but four friends from Jersey don’t know that yet, and their band is riding the wave of a surprise hit single. All that stands between them and their dreams of gold and platinum are a cross-country road-trip to L.A., strange venues, hostile audiences, and a label suit with an axe to grind, hellbent on seeing them fail.

solidjim Penpusher Posted on March 9, 2017 in Comedy.

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Question 2

After aliens attack a process is created that bestow superpowers to soldiers but at the cost of giving them a four-year lifespan. When an enhanced man learns of a new pending offensive and a secret that may end the war forever he must fight his way back from behind enemy lines or humanity will fall.

solidjim Penpusher Posted on March 9, 2017 in SciFi.

416 views
4 reviews
1 votes

Question 3

A pacified Viking warrior must pickup his sword and raise an army to rescue his son from an unlikely enemy hellbent on enslaving all of Scandinavia: unicorns.

solidjim Penpusher Posted on March 8, 2017 in Comedy.

391 views
4 reviews
0 votes

Question 4

When faced with the agony of getting jobs after graduation, a hapless hair metal band goes on the road trip from hell for a shot at a huge record deal but a jaded former classmate works for the label and will stop at nothing to see them flop.

solidjim Penpusher Posted on March 4, 2017 in Comedy.

358 views
1 reviews
0 votes

Question 5

When faced with the agony of getting real jobs after graduation, a hapless hair metal band must make their way to LA for a shot at a huge record deal but a former classmate (and failed musician) works for the label and will stop at nothing to see they flop.

solidjim Penpusher Posted on March 4, 2017 in Comedy.

318 views
0 reviews
0 votes

Question 6

One of the last hair metal bands in America must battle changing musical trends and a shadowy corporate adversary on their quest to reach L.A. and rock n roll stardom.

solidjim Penpusher Posted on March 2, 2017 in Comedy.

326 views
2 reviews
0 votes

Question 7

In 1990 a hapless hair metal band must make their way to Los Angeles for their chance at rock n roll stardom but a weaselly label exec and hot new music fads stand in their way.

solidjim Penpusher Posted on March 2, 2017 in Comedy.

330 views
2 reviews
0 votes

Question 8

When a space trucker saves Elvis Presley from assassination he must return to Earth, a planet that abandoned him as a child, and recover Presley’s hidden time machine to prevent it from being used to destroy the galaxy.

solidjim Penpusher Posted on February 23, 2017 in SciFi.

446 views
3 reviews
-2 votes

Question 9

A man raised in space, and taught how to be human by a Russian cyborg chimpanzee, must help Elvis Presley protect his time machine from a jealous alien hell-bent on destroying the galaxy.

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solidjim Penpusher Posted on February 22, 2017 in 01, SciFi.

442 views
5 reviews
0 votes

Question 10

A human orphan raised in outer space must overcome his sense of abandonment to help Elvis Presley protect a time machine from an alien hellbent on destroying the galaxy.

solidjim Penpusher Posted on February 22, 2017 in SciFi.

351 views
2 reviews
0 votes

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