An army Lieutenant resigns her commission to become a professional poker player, believing poker is safer than army combat, so she thought, until winning a huge amount from a psycho who seeks a deadly payback.

Question 1

An army Lieutenant resigns her commission to become a professional poker player, believing poker is safer than army combat, so she thought, until winning a huge amount from a psycho who seeks a deadly payback.

Steve Penpusher Posted on April 8, 2019 in Thriller.

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Question 2

A killer for hire, with PTSD, continues to murder while she anguishes and procrastinates over another assigned job. . . . Her psychologist.

Steve Penpusher Posted on April 4, 2019 in Thriller.

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Question 3

TITLE: A Psycho In The Cockpit.LOGLINE: A psycho in the cockpit.STORY IS ABOUT: A Psycho in the cockpit.

Steve Penpusher Posted on March 30, 2019 in Thriller.

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6 reviews
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Question 4

Ms. RAMBO and her female ET drinking buddy rescue PASSENGERS from starving evil ETs and then meets THE DAY THE EARTH STOOD STILL (of 1951).

Steve Penpusher Posted on March 25, 2019 in SciFi.

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Question 5

Friendly ETs frequently rescue abducted humans from bad ETs that eat their prey. Now, they must stop humans from nuking the earth so the good ETs can have another living planet in their interstellar federation.

Steve Penpusher Posted on February 27, 2019 in SciFi.

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Question 6

MY THIRD TRY: To stop a likely nuclear war among earthlings, a space alien whose race wants future control of an un-radiated planet, demands that all nukes be disassemble now or else NO electricity for a decade.

Steve Penpusher Posted on February 27, 2019 in SciFi.

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Question 7

This is my second choice:A space alien and her Paiute Indian female friend lands in a flying saucer on the Las Vegas Strip and demands that all nuclear weapons be disassemble or NO electricity for a decade.

Steve Penpusher Posted on February 26, 2019 in SciFi.

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Question 8

A space alien and her Paiute Indian female friend cause a day that Las Vegas stood still, thus alarming the earth leaders into disassembling all nuclear weapons.

Steve Penpusher Posted on February 26, 2019 in SciFi.

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Question 9

He lost his winning 300 grand ticket in a gust of wind then later finds it in a man’s cold dead fingers.

Steve Penpusher Posted on January 2, 2018 in Action.

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Question 10

A soldier returns home desiring to become a professional poker player, believing it’s a safer vocation than army combat, so she thought, until winning a large poker pot from a serial killer. Now she is back in a battle to save lives including her own.

Steve Penpusher Posted on January 1, 2018 in Action.

243 views
3 reviews
-1 votes

Answer 1

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Answer 2

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