When her pleas for help are dismissed by her British Intelligence handler, a former black ops soldier must chase alone across London the cunning foreign operative who kidnapped her delinquent kid brother.

Question 1

When her pleas for help are dismissed by her British Intelligence handler, a former black ops soldier must chase alone across London the cunning foreign operative who kidnapped her delinquent kid brother.

Illegal Seizure

Valentin Samurai Posted on August 8, 2014 in Public.

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5 reviews
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Question 2

Tasked to bring a little girl to a slaughter house, an android who wants to be more human must decide between following his orders and deny himself emotions or experience emotions and kill his masters who are organising a genocide.

Pinocchio’s dilemma

Valentin Samurai Posted on March 10, 2014 in Public.

754 views
3 reviews
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Question 3

When trying to reconnect with his estranged father, the illegitimate son of a Russian Mafiosi learns that his unrepentant father ordered the hit that killed his mother. Unable to get justice by legal means, he build his own criminal empire to destroy his father.

Black Godfather

Valentin Samurai Posted on February 20, 2014 in Public.

884 views
5 reviews
0 votes

Question 4

When the best players of a intergalactic war computer game are hunted down by an alien bounty hunter, the survivors must band together to fight both on earth and in the game to win a very real space war.Tag Line: a war simulation so good, it's real…

The Generals

Valentin Samurai Posted on February 17, 2014 in Public.

1K views
5 reviews
0 votes

Question 5

An amnesic secret service agent of Arab origin must recover his memory to clear his name and stop his terrorist brother from detonating a dirty bomb on US soil.

Brotherly bombers

Valentin Samurai Posted on February 16, 2014 in Public.

2K views
14 reviews
0 votes

Question 6

After being rejected by his Italo-American mafioso father, a mixed race lawyer decides to exact revenge by building his own criminal empire and destroying his father's.

Black Godfather

Valentin Samurai Posted on January 26, 2014 in Public.

2K views
23 reviews
0 votes

Question 7

When a volcanic eruption grounds all flights, a desperate racing driver must evade highway patrolmen to transport his dying fiancé heart transplant.

The Heart Racer

Valentin Samurai Posted on January 26, 2014 in Public.

2K views
18 reviews
0 votes

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