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A middle-aged man’s obsession with storytelling traps him in a mystical world of his own creation, where he must navigate dangerous obstacles and confront his deepest fears in order to escape. With the guidance of a wise owl, Cameron discovers that the only way out is to confront the darker aspects of his imagination and find the courage to embrace reality once again
or would something like: "when a struggling writer becomes trapped in his own fantastical world, Cameron, a middle-aged man who finds comfort in storytelling, must find his way back to reality before his obsession becomes his undoing. As he journeys through his own imagination, facing dangerous obstRead more
or would something like: “when a struggling writer becomes trapped in his own fantastical world, Cameron, a middle-aged man who finds comfort in storytelling, must find his way back to reality before his obsession becomes his undoing. As he journeys through his own imagination, facing dangerous obstacles and battling inner demons, Cameron must confront the painful memories that have led him to lose himself in his own tales. ” be better?
See lessAfter his son leaves a stolen item in his possession, 80-year-old Roy must go on the run from the police to clear his name, a journey which forces him to choose between his family and doing what is right.
I think that logline sounds pretty interesting! It sets up the conflict and stakes of the story clearly and makes me curious to see how Roy's journey will play out. It also has a relatable and emotional dilemma at its core - choosing between family and doing what's right - which I think could resonaRead more
I think that logline sounds pretty interesting! It sets up the conflict and stakes of the story clearly and makes me curious to see how Roy’s journey will play out. It also has a relatable and emotional dilemma at its core – choosing between family and doing what’s right – which I think could resonate with a lot of people. However, it may benefit from some additional details to make it more engaging and unique. For example, what is the stolen item and why did Roy’s son steal it? What specific obstacles does Roy face as he goes on the run? Overall, it’s a solid logline that could work as a starting point for the story. Good job Amy
See lessWhen an unsettling past is brought to light between two enemy veterans, a young lady struggling to find her story in the world must reconcile the gentleman, for friendship and trust is at stake.
This logline sets up the conflict and stakes of the story pretty clearly. It tells us that there are two veteran enemies with a bad past, and a young lady who needs to make peace between them. But we don't know what the past is or why it matters, and we don't know much about the lady or what she's sRead more
This logline sets up the conflict and stakes of the story pretty clearly. It tells us that there are two veteran enemies with a bad past, and a young lady who needs to make peace between them. But we don’t know what the past is or why it matters, and we don’t know much about the lady or what she’s struggling with. Still, if the story is done well and has good characters and themes, this logline could work as an idea to build on.
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