We are circling the feel. Thanks for the help. I’ll post a new version soon. He is a sad person. Unhinged and rage are correct, but miss the emotional notes (limits of english I guess). The needle I am trying to thread is to create unlikable victims and a sympathetic serial killer. But as the storyRead more
We are circling the feel. Thanks for the help. I’ll post a new version soon. He is a sad person. Unhinged and rage are correct, but miss the emotional notes (limits of english I guess).
The needle I am trying to thread is to create unlikable victims and a sympathetic serial killer. But as the story progresses we begin to lose our love of him. So his death becomes the best we can hope for him.
After his wife is murdered a man begins to see her ghost at the same time being a vigilante no matter how much she protests.
CraigDGriffiths
Deep in grief a taxi driver haunted by his murdered wife’s ghost becomes vigilante despite her ghostly protests. A have streamlined it to this.
Deep in grief a taxi driver haunted by his murdered wife’s ghost becomes vigilante despite her ghostly protests.
A have streamlined it to this.
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CraigDGriffiths
Interesting. Thank you. Do like the phrasing of your suggestion.
Interesting. Thank you. Do like the phrasing of your suggestion.
See lessAfter his wife is murdered a man begins to see her ghost at the same time being a vigilante no matter how much she protests.
CraigDGriffiths
We are circling the feel. Thanks for the help. I’ll post a new version soon. He is a sad person. Unhinged and rage are correct, but miss the emotional notes (limits of english I guess). The needle I am trying to thread is to create unlikable victims and a sympathetic serial killer. But as the storyRead more
We are circling the feel. Thanks for the help. I’ll post a new version soon. He is a sad person. Unhinged and rage are correct, but miss the emotional notes (limits of english I guess).
The needle I am trying to thread is to create unlikable victims and a sympathetic serial killer. But as the story progresses we begin to lose our love of him. So his death becomes the best we can hope for him.
Easy to do in 100 pages, not 30 words.
Thanks again.
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