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  1. Posted: January 28, 2020In: Horror

    A man with multiple personality disorder is being held captive by a murderous cult or his own personalities. He must rescue a girl who may or may not exist and escape.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on February 6, 2020 at 8:54 pm

    Thanks Rich, but that is a completely different film. That is really quite straight forward. We are watching him struggle with reality. This story has the audience question what they are seeing as well. The ?is he or isn?t he? feeling.

    Thanks Rich, but that is a completely different film. That is really quite straight forward. We are watching him struggle with reality. This story has the audience question what they are seeing as well.

    The ?is he or isn?t he? feeling.

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  2. Posted: January 28, 2020In: Horror

    A man with multiple personality disorder is being held captive by a murderous cult or his own personalities. He must rescue a girl who may or may not exist and escape.

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    Added an answer on January 31, 2020 at 6:15 am

    Thanks everyone, Do we have any logline rewrite suggestions? So a bit more of the story. The guys is actually a newly create personality. ?The ?other personalities is trying to drive him to commit suicide. There is a dominant personality which is also a serial killer. ?The dominant personality alwayRead more

    Thanks everyone,

    Do we have any logline rewrite suggestions?

    So a bit more of the story.

    The guys is actually a newly create personality. ?The ?other personalities is trying to drive him to commit suicide. There is a dominant personality which is also a serial killer. ?The dominant personality always takes control when he can sense something, hence the new personality.

    The girl does not exist. She is a voice from the basement he is trying to help escape once he hears her. ? She is used in the story to give him an insight into how the victims were feeling.

    Finally he learns the truth and kills himself.

    It looks at the question ?is a person responsible for actions they are aware? ?would you die to save others?

    So I have a story.

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  3. Posted: January 28, 2020In: Horror

    A man with multiple personality disorder is being held captive by a murderous cult or his own personalities. He must rescue a girl who may or may not exist and escape.

    CraigDGriffiths Uberwriter
    Added an answer on January 30, 2020 at 7:44 am

    Second attempt:A man with multiple personalities is held captive in an abandoned farm by a murderous cult or his own personalities. While escaping he finds a girl, who may or may not exist. They must escape before they are killed.?During the story we find out that he believes he has some disorder, hRead more

    Second attempt:

    A man with multiple personalities is held captive in an abandoned farm by a murderous cult or his own personalities. While escaping he finds a girl, who may or may not exist. They must escape before they are killed.

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    During the story we find out that he believes he has some disorder, he loses huge blocks of time. He is unaware of the other personalities.

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