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After the Grim Reaper has guided countless people to the Afterlife, a suitable replacement must don the cowl, so Death can finally rest in peace.
This is a good setting but it doesn't describe the story conflicts. Is the new person happy about the job? Does he have to die? Does the GR want to retire? All that can and must be in the story. Not your story, but here is an example "The Grim Reaper must convince a father to leaves his family and bRead more
This is a good setting but it doesn’t describe the story conflicts.
Is the new person happy about the job?
Does he have to die?
Does the GR want to retire?
All that can and must be in the story. Not your story, but here is an example
“The Grim Reaper must convince a father to leaves his family and become the reaper’s replacement”
See lessIn the aftermath of nuclear war, a bleak NASA scientist builds and enters a virtual recreation of the past to find a way to save civilisation, only for the system?s AI to determine humanity is beyond saving and attempts to kill her.
It is just a little wordy and there are words not working for me. Begrudgingly isn't the right word for me and I am unsure it is needed. What about:After visions of an apocalypse a woman starts assassinating the people that will cause it when her son from the future comes back to kill her and bringRead more
It is just a little wordy and there are words not working for me. Begrudgingly isn’t the right word for me and I am unsure it is needed. What about:
After visions of an apocalypse a woman starts assassinating the people that will cause it when her son from the future comes back to kill her and bring about the end of the world.
Still too wordy, but more action focused.
Hope it helps.
See lessA gangster keen to keep street credibility and protect his boss who wants to go legit will do anything including killing the bosses son.
The problem I am facing is it is an epic. Which means it is a story about a number of people against a backdrop. The second in charge is the main motivator to story. But the son has most of the screen time. The boss is trying to build a legit empire, but his second in charge who is still very 'streeRead more
The problem I am facing is it is an epic. Which means it is a story about a number of people against a backdrop.
The second in charge is the main motivator to story. But the son has most of the screen time. The boss is trying to build a legit empire, but his second in charge who is still very ‘street’ . He is keen to rule with an iron fist at the street level, which is undermining the boss.
When the bosses son gets in trouble the second in charge is willing to have him killed to be seen as tough.
These are a few beats, but there is a lot more happening.
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