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"After following a street magician, the broke journalist gets haunted by a small group of wizards for discovering it wasn?t just a sleight of hand." This logline puts the inciting incident last. A problem I see is with the antagonists. Why do these wizards care? What do they gain by haunting him? IfRead more
"A lost vegan food critic at the centre of two primitive competitive tribes must convince them all into ?one big happy vegetarian village? before the next bounty fest, where they compete over their rights to eat him.." This premise seems too much like a white savior trope.? Where the primitive and uRead more
Stakes are simply the consequences that will occur if a character fails at their goal. Failing to stop a shark before eating people, means that those people will be eaten. Stakes have to be set up. Why is getting a date to prom so important? What negative consequence will happen if he fails? Why isRead more