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This logline is confusing. First of all, take a girl to what? The inciting incident lacks a causal relationship with the action of the story. How does people finding out he's gay make him have to go with a girl? T Why does he have to take a girl in the first place? Do you mean his parents don't knowRead more
"When a portal to hell mysteriously opens, an inexperienced mage born of the hellish dimension, is the only one who can close it and bring peace to the kingdom." This logline is structurally sound and conceptually interesting. The only problem I see is that logline makes a case for why the mage?shouRead more
Yunsa: This doesn't seem to be a synopsis, and it definitely isn't a logline. In 109 words the post doesn't establish a protagonist, an antagonist, or any sort of plot. This post uses story-specific elements that make no sense out of context and I can't make much sense out of it. I thought this concRead more