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In France, an extremely gifted, aging, and seriously ill writer, supported by a female student, starts his last desperate battle against the critics and his best friend to achieve the global recognition.
When I read aging, I assume the writer is in his mid to late 70s. I think it would be better to mention the age since you also go on to state the writer is seriously ill. Why is (whatever he's working on) his last battle against the critics? Is he terminally ill and dying? If so, then you could alsoRead more
When I read aging, I assume the writer is in his mid to late 70s. I think it would be better to mention the age since you also go on to state the writer is seriously ill. Why is (whatever he’s working on) his last battle against the critics? Is he terminally ill and dying? If so, then you could also mention that it gives your logline a ticking timebomb. And who’s the main antagonist here? Is it the critics or his best friend? What did his best friend do that the writer is so against him?
See lessIn a time when white children born to Japanese mothers were put to death, one boy survives. Across time, the boy becomes the protector of the weak.
"Across time, the boy grows into a warrior..." still sounds vague. Maybe you could give the boy a definite goal to accomplish, say avenging his siblings perhaps? Or maybe, this one boy has a younger siblings, and the authorities are out to get them. And his goal is to ensure their - most importantlyRead more
“Across time, the boy grows into a warrior…” still sounds vague. Maybe you could give the boy a definite goal to accomplish, say avenging his siblings perhaps? Or maybe, this one boy has a younger siblings, and the authorities are out to get them. And his goal is to ensure their – most importantly his younger sibling’s – survival. But the boy realises that this is a never ending process and must put a stop to (whatever it is) once and for all.
That’s what I am thinking. But you get my drift.
See lessIn an effort to track down his estranged girlfriend and reconnect with her, a recovering alcoholic embarks on a cross-country journey that turns out to be poignant discovery into his past.
This is the third version of my logline. Here are the first and the second versions: 1. An arrogant tattoo artist sets off on a cross country journey to track his missing girlfriend only to unravel memories he is refusing to acknowledge. 2. During a cross-country journey to track his missing girlfriRead more
This is the third version of my logline. Here are the first and the second versions:
1. An arrogant tattoo artist sets off on a cross country journey to track his missing girlfriend only to unravel memories he is refusing to acknowledge.
See less2. During a cross-country journey to track his missing girlfriend Nisha, Dhondup finds himself reluctantly involved in the lives of people who all seem to have a connection to her in some way.