1. Posted: May 15, 2017In:

    Noise Control Beta – In a world where to perceive a forbidden noise is the highest crime, a cop whose wife starts hearing it must find its origin in the desperate attempt to save her.

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    Thanks everyone, the problem is that the gouvernement says the noise doesn't even exist - that people who 'hears it' are sick and will become dangerous. That's why I'm not 100% ?convinced "with the rare ability to hear".

    Thanks everyone,

    the problem is that the gouvernement says the noise doesn’t even exist – that people who ‘hears it’ are sick and will become dangerous. That’s why I’m not 100% ?convinced “with the rare ability to hear”.

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  2. Posted: December 1, 2016In:

    An unemployed dropout fakes the paperwork to become a family physician. When her patients start to see through the lie, she decides to use surgery to silence them.

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    I have no problem with a villain as protagonist. Besides, the problem is that he has no serious?obstacles, only 'solutions'. problem: unemployed/solution: fake papers; problem:patients upset/solution: killing them. This movie is a win win win... logline should focus on a longterm source of conflictRead more

    I have no problem with a villain as protagonist. Besides, the problem is that he has no serious?obstacles, only ‘solutions’. problem: unemployed/solution: fake papers; problem:patients upset/solution: killing them. This movie is a win win win… logline should focus on a longterm source of conflict in my opinion.

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  3. Posted: December 1, 2016In:

    Born in the 70’s to a young and offbeat anti-war activist, a roubled woman recounts her spiraling descent into adulthood while baking an apple pie.

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    "her spiraling descent into adulthood": in my opinion the movie is hidden in this un-undertandable words. What happens in the movie? I like the idea that everything is a flashback while the main character is?baking an apple pie but this detail is irrilevant in the logline.Anyway, the logline has a gRead more

    “her spiraling descent into adulthood”: in my opinion the movie is hidden in this un-undertandable words. What happens in the movie? I like the idea that everything is a flashback while the main character is?baking an apple pie but this detail is irrilevant in the logline.

    Anyway, the logline has a good writing style.

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