1. Posted: June 27, 2022In:

    When her family unexpectedly comes back into her life after years of estrangement, a young woman must confront her past and the people who will never accept her for who she is.

    Gabbie.Michelle Penpusher

    I love the amount of detail that is provided in this logline while also not giving away too much of the storyline. the only thing I would suggest would be to add in the time period as I think i remember you saying it was not set in present day.

    I love the amount of detail that is provided in this logline while also not giving away too much of the storyline. the only thing I would suggest would be to add in the time period as I think i remember you saying it was not set in present day.

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  2. Posted: June 22, 2022In:

    When a cursed goddess is invited to partake in speed dating, she must try to find a lover who can withstand her curse, and her temper.

    Gabbie.Michelle Penpusher

    hah personally, I still think it should've been the feast of the gods but nah, what you have now is really good. It is good, simple and to the point. If you want, you can try to add to it to add more meat to it but it sounds really good how it is now.

    hah personally, I still think it should’ve been the feast of the gods but nah, what you have now is really good. It is good, simple and to the point. If you want, you can try to add to it to add more meat to it but it sounds really good how it is now.

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  3. Posted: June 23, 2022In:

    When an 18-year-old female accidentally leaves a love letter to her female crush on the kitchen counter, she must find a way to come out to her parents before her mother accuses her father of cheating.

    Gabbie.Michelle Penpusher

    would something like that work better?

    would something like that work better?

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