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  1. Posted: September 21, 2020In: Examples

    An immortal alien race must come out of hiding on earth and reunite, when an ancient enemy threatens humanity.

    giannisggeorgiou Samurai
    Added an answer on September 23, 2020 at 5:54 am

    I see this is posted under the "Examples" category. Is it an existing movie, then? Which one?

    I see this is posted under the “Examples” category. Is it an existing movie, then? Which one?

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  2. Posted: September 23, 2020In: Drama

    After being bullied because of her autism, a misunderstood college student joins a secret sorority group of girls only to find out she has a kill a fellow student.

    giannisggeorgiou Samurai
    Added an answer on September 23, 2020 at 5:51 am

    The only movie that comes to my mind when I hear about a protagonist who MUST kill someone against their will is "The Killing of a Chinese Bookie" by John Cassavetes, where the killing was to balance a huge gambling dept to the mafia. What are the stakes in your story? She must kill a fellow studentRead more

    The only movie that comes to my mind when I hear about a protagonist who MUST kill someone against their will is “The Killing of a Chinese Bookie” by John Cassavetes, where the killing was to balance a huge gambling dept to the mafia.

    What are the stakes in your story? She must kill a fellow student or what? What’s stopping her from reporting the sorority as a crime organisation? Her autism? Is this realistic?

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  3. Posted: September 23, 2020In: Student Loglines

    A cold-hearted journalist records a documentary about a very talented e-sport player until she discovers the hardness of being born unlucky.

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    Added an answer on September 23, 2020 at 5:43 am

    CHARACTER: "A cold-hearted journalist..." Okay, that's definitely a flaw and a possible start for a transformation arc. EVENT: You don't have one. No inciting incident. We know she is shooting a documentary about an e-sport player (whatever that is... What is that? If I don't know what it is, thereRead more

    CHARACTER: “A cold-hearted journalist…” Okay, that’s definitely a flaw and a possible start for a transformation arc.

    EVENT: You don’t have one. No inciting incident. We know she is shooting a documentary about an e-sport player (whatever that is… What is that? If I don’t know what it is, there must be more people who don’t know what it is.)

    ACTION: You don’t have one. “She discovers the hardness of being born unlucky” is not an action. What does she want and how can she get it? That’s what drives a story.

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