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  1. Posted: May 2, 2020In: Romance

    When a bad boy movie star agrees to a blind date, he ends up with his biggest fan – a struggling single mom, whom he falls for.

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    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on May 4, 2020 at 4:48 am

    Can Jason Statham fall for a single mom? Sure, but I feel we are getting sucked into the Hallmark channel??. Breaking it down: Why now? Why are these two different worlds together? How about she wins a meet & greet contest with said bad boy movie star Who is she? She is a chill single mom Yoga iRead more

    Can Jason Statham fall for a single mom? Sure, but I feel we are getting sucked into the Hallmark channel??.

    Breaking it down:

    • Why now? Why are these two different worlds together? How about she wins a meet & greet contest with said bad boy movie star
    • Who is she? She is a chill single mom Yoga instructor
    • Where is the rub/conflict? He botches the meet and greets

    After botching a meet and greet with his biggest fan ? a single mom Yogi, a bad boy movie star must turn his hectic life around to find inner peace and true love.

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  2. Posted: April 22, 2020In: Coming of Age

    When a terminally ill student wants to commit suicide, he meets an enigmatic girl who gives him new courage to face life, only to find out that her life expectancy is lower than his.

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    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on April 26, 2020 at 7:37 am

    When I see the wording ?suicidal terminally ill student? my gut reaction, although harsh was - why bother? Why should I bother to invest any emotions in a lead who is physically/emotionally dead already? Not knowing your story, I came up with some stuff to allow me to care ? ?A suicidal terminally iRead more

    When I see the wording ?suicidal terminally ill student? my gut reaction, although harsh was – why bother? Why should I bother to invest any emotions in a lead who is physically/emotionally dead already?

    Not knowing your story, I came up with some stuff to allow me to care ?

    • ?A suicidal terminally ill student finds hope? to ?A terminally ill student on the verge of committing suicide finds hope?.
    • ?after falling for an enigmatic girl? to the epitome of upbeat ? how about falling for a cheerleader? He is a student, right?
    • I do not believe you need to state ?who gives him new courage to face life? ? the word hope is universal for someone in his state. Plus, losing that will free up space for some hopes dashed stuff mentioned by CraigDGriffiths.

    With the help of a cheerleader, a terminally ill student on the verge of committing suicide finds inspiration but hopes are dashed when he discovers her life expectancy is shorter than his.

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  3. Posted: April 21, 2020In: Horror

    A young team of investors are renovating some rundown rowhouses, and soon realize the neighborhood has a very dark history.

    Odie Samurai
    Added an answer on April 23, 2020 at 8:15 am

    Sounds interesting but please check out this logline write-up by Richiev via (Home page > click Votes) to help remedy all the questions this has generated. On Loglines: There are certain answers to logline problems that many of us seem to repeat as we give advice. After reading ? rewrite and postRead more

    Sounds interesting but please check out this logline write-up by Richiev via (Home page > click Votes) to help remedy all the questions this has generated.

    On Loglines: There are certain answers to logline problems that many of us seem to repeat as we give advice.

    After reading ? rewrite and post. We get this will not be your final logline version, the goal is to present your logline in a way the community can help.

    No, I am not sponsored by Richiev ? ? it?s just good stuff.

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