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BRIGHT ORANGE BALL – POV Ball. After one of the best soccer players in the world passes over his first soccer ball must convince the legend’s grandson to take up soccer.
Would I buy a book for my youngling based on your premise? Sure! But per your logline, the soccer player is the main character, not the ball. Who has to convince the grandson to play, the legend or the ball? Why does the grandson have to be persuaded - what are the stakes? For logline structure reseRead more
Would I buy a book for my youngling based on your premise? Sure! But per your logline, the soccer player is the main character, not the ball. Who has to convince the grandson to play, the legend or the ball? Why does the grandson have to be persuaded – what are the stakes?
For logline structure research, lookup movies like The Brave Little Toaster. That bright orange ball is your hook, and I can envision a bridge to becoming something better for both the ball and the player. Keep going! I hope you find this constructive.
See lessAn ex-gambler wrestling with addiction, is forced to win back her daughter by playing her abusive mother in law in a winner take all game of poker.
Consider the following: “An ex-gambler and her estranged poker champion mother-in-law compete for sole custody of her daughter” The addiction and abuse references — B story plot points. Keep going, would love to watch.
Consider the following:
“An ex-gambler and her estranged poker champion mother-in-law compete for sole custody of her daughter”
The addiction and abuse references — B story plot points.
See lessKeep going, would love to watch.
A reluctant psychic has a near death experience and learns that karmic strands will continue to hold her and everyone she knows trapped in the same life experiences for eternity unless she can overcome her narcissistic mother’s attempts to keep her powerless and is willing to use her abilities to see the past, present and future to finally free everyone’s souls.
Leaning towards: “When a near-death experience reveals toxic karmic relationships, a humble psychic must overcome her narcissistic mother in order to free powers to save the future of humanity”
Leaning towards:
See less“When a near-death experience reveals toxic karmic relationships, a humble psychic must overcome her narcissistic mother in order to free powers to save the future of humanity”