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Fear of monetary demise turns the globe into a top-security prison; Buddha senses implosion; looms with a pragmatic paragon to unzip recession and stress from deceptive human life; enlightens three lost children who endure from NASA plane crash in Vedic woods.
Interesting premise, consider the following: 1. I struggle with your major event - the fifth Buddha’s return / following these three youngsters. 2. Your world is great, but who is your baddie? 3. Concerning the three youngsters, is the fifth Buddha reborn through one of them? Example: “In a collapsiRead more
Interesting premise, consider the following:
1. I struggle with your major event – the fifth Buddha’s return / following these three youngsters.
2. Your world is great, but who is your baddie?
3. Concerning the three youngsters, is the fifth Buddha reborn through one of them?
Example:
“In a collapsing global police state, a reincarnate fifth Buddha sets out to restore nirvana to the world”
I only have a basic understanding of Buddhism – maybe use my thoughts/questions as a good example of your typical reader.
Keep going, take care.
See lessA young, promising rail enthusiast embarks across the country to rescue a girl held hostage by a hostile organization.
Consider the following: Why him and not the authorities to the rescue? Who is this girl to your protag? What is this hostile org and what is their agenda? Example: “A young railfan embarks on a cross-country rescue mission when his runaway girl is taken by a polygamist cult to marry their big love lRead more
Consider the following:
Why him and not the authorities to the rescue?
Who is this girl to your protag?
What is this hostile org and what is their agenda?
Example:
“A young railfan embarks on a cross-country rescue mission when his runaway girl is taken by a polygamist cult to marry their big love leader”
Hope you find this constructive, take care.
See lessTo save a retirement home from bankruptcy, its uptight director must convince her estranged, obnoxious father to make a significant donation, or face losing her job and custody of her daughter. But when he insists on playing a role in running the home, the director must balance the need to keep her father’s money with the increasing annoyance of the home’s residents with the coarse intruder.
Leaning towards: “An uptight director's cash-strapped retirement home is turned topsy-turvy when accepting a bailout from her estranged father and his ensuing meddling sparks an old-folks revolt” Make this yours, take care.
Leaning towards:
“An uptight director’s cash-strapped retirement home is turned topsy-turvy when accepting a bailout from her estranged father and his ensuing meddling sparks an old-folks revolt”
Make this yours, take care.
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