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Enslaved in the desert, a young boy with bowl cut must race a car with no wheels to win his freedom but when a priest forces him to join a cult, he must learn to fly a chrome airplane to kill tin soldiers before they destroy a planet of Rastafarian toad men.
It's funny some people were fooled by it. I posted it on Reddit and someone went on and on about what I terrible logline it was and that there's already a movie of the same title. That said, I'd like to revise "boy with a bowl cut" to "expressionless moppet". Thanks!
It’s funny some people were fooled by it. I posted it on Reddit and someone went on and on about what I terrible logline it was and that there’s already a movie of the same title. That said, I’d like to revise “boy with a bowl cut” to “expressionless moppet”. Thanks!
See lessWhen seven year old Olive needs to get to a far away beauty pageant her family accompanies her on an arduous road trip.
An erratic family endures a disastrous road trip to enter their young daughter in a superfluous child beauty pageant.
An erratic family endures a disastrous road trip to enter their young daughter in a superfluous child beauty pageant.
See lessParanoid and close to breaking a drug addicted army medic must survive a plot to get him killed after he discusses a friendly fire cover up.
I'm very new to screenwriting but a decent copy editor, just a couple of changes to make it cleaner: "Paranoid and close to breaking, a drug-addicted army medic must survive a plot to kill him after he discusses a friendly fire cover-up." Maybe it's assumed, but are the antagonists his soldiers fromRead more
I’m very new to screenwriting but a decent copy editor, just a couple of changes to make it cleaner:
“Paranoid and close to breaking, a drug-addicted army medic must survive a plot to kill him after he discusses a friendly fire cover-up.”
Maybe it’s assumed, but are the antagonists his soldiers from his Army platoon? Maybe a B-line plot line with a woman who helps him along the way. If he’s in the Middle-East make her Muslim and risking her own life to lend support?
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