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  1. Asked: May 3, 2016In: Crime

    After being pressured by the cops to turn informant a teen is sent on a run by her drug dealer boss, who is holding her younger sister, knowing this run will get her killed.

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    Added an answer on May 4, 2016 at 11:56 am

    Logline really confused me. I don't know why her knowing a piece of information wold get her killed.

    Logline really confused me. I don’t know why her knowing a piece of information wold get her killed.

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  2. Asked: March 18, 2016In: Drama

    In a small Nevada town, a homeschooling teenager emerges from hiding to play varsity basketball only to be bullied when it is discovered that his mother works in the local brothel.

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    Added an answer on March 19, 2016 at 8:45 pm

    +1 on him being as the Event of the story. "When a reclusive varsity basketball player is outed as the bastard son of a prostitute, he must....."

    +1 on him being as the Event of the story. “When a reclusive varsity basketball player is outed as the bastard son of a prostitute, he must…..”

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  3. Asked: March 16, 2016In: Thriller

    When a group of holidaying students wake up to find themselves buried up to their necks on an isolated beach amidst the rising tide, they are left with nothing but a note telling them they are being watched, and among them is a mole. They must figure out who that is if they want to survive.

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    Added an answer on March 16, 2016 at 1:27 pm

    Just spit balling this one, I like the premise a lot but am struggling to come up with a compelling action that helps them escape. They are after all incapacitated. Any helps/tips would be greatly appreciated.

    Just spit balling this one, I like the premise a lot but am struggling to come up with a compelling action that helps them escape. They are after all incapacitated. Any helps/tips would be greatly appreciated.

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