Just spit balling this one, I like the premise a lot but am struggling to come up with a compelling action that helps them escape. They are after all incapacitated. Any helps/tips would be greatly appreciated.
Just spit balling this one, I like the premise a lot but am struggling to come up with a compelling action that helps them escape. They are after all incapacitated. Any helps/tips would be greatly appreciated.
After being pressured by the cops to turn informant a teen is sent on a run by her drug dealer boss, who is holding her younger sister, knowing this run will get her killed.
Karel Segers
Logline really confused me. I don't know why her knowing a piece of information wold get her killed.
Logline really confused me. I don’t know why her knowing a piece of information wold get her killed.
See lessIn a small Nevada town, a homeschooling teenager emerges from hiding to play varsity basketball only to be bullied when it is discovered that his mother works in the local brothel.
Karel Segers
+1 on him being as the Event of the story. "When a reclusive varsity basketball player is outed as the bastard son of a prostitute, he must....."
+1 on him being as the Event of the story. “When a reclusive varsity basketball player is outed as the bastard son of a prostitute, he must…..”
See lessWhen a group of holidaying students wake up to find themselves buried up to their necks on an isolated beach amidst the rising tide, they are left with nothing but a note telling them they are being watched, and among them is a mole. They must figure out who that is if they want to survive.
Karel Segers
Just spit balling this one, I like the premise a lot but am struggling to come up with a compelling action that helps them escape. They are after all incapacitated. Any helps/tips would be greatly appreciated.
Just spit balling this one, I like the premise a lot but am struggling to come up with a compelling action that helps them escape. They are after all incapacitated. Any helps/tips would be greatly appreciated.
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