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  1. Posted: November 1, 2021In: Drama

    The ambition of a young woman to be wealthy and own a portfolio of properties is stymied by the sudden death of her husband. But she continues to prioritise her need for success and wealth over the welfare of her teenage stepson. Feeling unloved he contemplates suicide. She is failing to reach her goal. From the tangles, bonds and mixed loyalties they find that success is a shared journey.

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    Replied to answer on November 9, 2021 at 5:13 pm

    You still need to do more work on the logline. Save your money and study the great examples and breakdowns available on this website. When you get your logline right you will have a firmer grasp of your story.

    You still need to do more work on the logline. Save your money and study the great examples and breakdowns available on this website. When you get your logline right you will have a firmer grasp of your story.

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  2. Posted: November 9, 2021In: Thriller

    A headstrong and impulsive youth steals £230 million of mob funds and stays one step ahead of the top mob enforcer until he decides to donate it to a charitable cause.

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    Replied to answer on November 9, 2021 at 5:00 pm

    Thanks. Appreciate your thoughts on this. The decision to donate the money happens at the top of the final act. This obviously is irreversible and will lead to very heavy consequences. So, he is sacrificing himself at the altar of a good cause, which is noble. And, the enforcer also displays noble qRead more

    Thanks. Appreciate your thoughts on this. The decision to donate the money happens at the top of the final act. This obviously is irreversible and will lead to very heavy consequences. So, he is sacrificing himself at the altar of a good cause, which is noble. And, the enforcer also displays noble qualities, so he is not a stereotypical bad guy.

    Also, the question of clean Vs dirty money is discussed. The enforcer himself believes that ‘no money is dirty, only people’. Also, stealing what is already stolen creates a situation of moral relativity.

    I think I should change ‘steals’ to ‘stumbles across’ because it’s not a heist but a crime of opportunity. The character arc would be from opportunistic to self-sacrificing since it’s clear the mob will treat him extremely harshly when they finally do lay hands on him and find out their money is gone.

    His motivation is what changes and not his character. I like to think character is hardwired anyway. I mean, alcoholics never lose the urge to drink, they learn to sublimate or positively channel the urge.

    Also, the shift in motivation happens in stages, giving all the money to charity is not predictable, but it does make sense, especially because he is impulsive. His motivation to give all the money away is this: innocent people he cares about have died and he feels the need to somehow redeem himself, he also knows that the mob will never stop hunting him and he will suffer terribly when they finally catch him. So, on impulse, he decides to make the best of an extremely bad situation.

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  3. Posted: October 31, 2021In: Drama

    In a hotel bar on the main avenue of Naples, a famous psychoanalyst talks about his patients to his colleague, Giovanna, exposing human passions, virtues and weaknesses. Among them, Sergio and Julien stand out, whose intense love-hate relationship will affect the doctor to unsuspected extremes from which he will not get rid of easily.

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    Added an answer on November 9, 2021 at 10:19 am

    To create dramatic conflict and forward movement, the doctor needs a strong goal or an obstacle.

    To create dramatic conflict and forward movement, the doctor needs a strong goal or an obstacle.

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