1. Posted: November 2, 2021In:

    A demoted FBI agent is sent on an administrative duty in a remote border town but, when a body is discovered, he tries to solve the mystery despite the reluctance of the local police and his boss.

    kbfilmworks Samurai

    OK. Give us the logline for the pilot and obviously it needs to work as a standalone movie and also as a setup for the series. You'll probably need 50-70 words to deliver all of this.

    OK. Give us the logline for the pilot and obviously it needs to work as a standalone movie and also as a setup for the series. You’ll probably need 50-70 words to deliver all of this.

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  2. Posted: November 1, 2021In:

    The ambition of a young woman to be wealthy and own a portfolio of properties is stymied by the sudden death of her husband. But she continues to prioritise her need for success and wealth over the welfare of her teenage stepson. Feeling unloved he contemplates suicide. She is failing to reach her goal. From the tangles, bonds and mixed loyalties they find that success is a shared journey.

    kbfilmworks Samurai

    Your logline really needs to address an action or obstacle with sufficient drama to sustain an entire movie and test your protagonist.

    Your logline really needs to address an action or obstacle with sufficient drama to sustain an entire movie and test your protagonist.

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  3. Posted: November 2, 2021In:

    A demoted FBI agent is sent on an administrative duty in a remote border town but, when a body is discovered, he tries to solve the mystery despite the reluctance of the local police and his boss.

    kbfilmworks Samurai

    Nice set-up for your protagonist. Your logline really needs to address a highly dramatic action or obstacle along with a worthy antagonist to test your protagonist.

    Nice set-up for your protagonist. Your logline really needs to address a highly dramatic action or obstacle along with a worthy antagonist to test your protagonist.

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