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  1. Posted: May 28, 2013In: Public

    Struggling through the death of her father and the onset of manic depression, a gifted 17-year old young woman?s life is turned upside down when she must live with her estranged party-girl mother, where she quietly plans to kill herself on her 18th birthday – unless life intervenes.

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    Added an answer on May 29, 2013 at 8:45 am

    After her father dies, a gifted and troubled young woman must learn to live with her estranged party girl mother.

    After her father dies, a gifted and troubled young woman must learn to live with her estranged party girl mother.

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  2. Posted: May 24, 2013In: Public

    When a penniless young writer steals a suitcase full of dirty money a street enforcer from Japan is sent to track him down and an epic struggle begins on the streets of East London.

    kbfilmworks Samurai
    Added an answer on May 24, 2013 at 8:22 pm

    Thanks, Nick. Penniless is why he steals the suitcase and yes it does fall into his lap, it's not a heist. Also, a writer has imagination and mental fortitude and intelligence so it's an interesting match up against a streetwise and vicious fish-out-of-water heavy. And what makes it epic? The stakesRead more

    Thanks, Nick. Penniless is why he steals the suitcase and yes it does fall into his lap, it’s not a heist. Also, a writer has imagination and mental fortitude and intelligence so it’s an interesting match up against a streetwise and vicious fish-out-of-water heavy.

    And what makes it epic? The stakes. Circumstances lead the writer to give the money to a worthy cause and eventually sacrifice his life to save his friends from the enforcer’s wrath. Plus, the enforcer owes a debt of honour which demands he kill himself if he fails his mission.

    Truth be told, there’s a lot of genre-busting elements hard to include in a logline so I intend to include a short synopsis with any pitch.

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  3. Posted: May 23, 2013In: Public

    A man faces an unimaginable crisis when he discovers his new girlfriend –the daughter of a Voodoo queen– is a zombie.

    kbfilmworks Samurai
    Added an answer on May 24, 2013 at 4:39 am

    I think it's usual not to use character names in a logline except if they are famous people or historical characters. How about this for the logline? A guy's (replace with a brief character description) worst nightmare comes true when he meets the woman of his dreams and she turns out to be a zombieRead more

    I think it’s usual not to use character names in a logline except if they are famous people or historical characters.

    How about this for the logline? A guy’s (replace with a brief character description) worst nightmare comes true when he meets the woman of his dreams and she turns out to be a zombie.

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