1. Posted: May 28, 2013In:

    Struggling through the death of her father and the onset of manic depression, a gifted 17-year old young woman?s life is turned upside down when she must live with her estranged party-girl mother, where she quietly plans to kill herself on her 18th birthday – unless life intervenes.

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    After her father dies, a gifted and troubled young woman must learn to live with her estranged party girl mother.

    After her father dies, a gifted and troubled young woman must learn to live with her estranged party girl mother.

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  2. Posted: May 24, 2013In:

    When a penniless young writer steals a suitcase full of dirty money a street enforcer from Japan is sent to track him down and an epic struggle begins on the streets of East London.

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    Thanks, Nick. Penniless is why he steals the suitcase and yes it does fall into his lap, it's not a heist. Also, a writer has imagination and mental fortitude and intelligence so it's an interesting match up against a streetwise and vicious fish-out-of-water heavy. And what makes it epic? The stakesRead more

    Thanks, Nick. Penniless is why he steals the suitcase and yes it does fall into his lap, it’s not a heist. Also, a writer has imagination and mental fortitude and intelligence so it’s an interesting match up against a streetwise and vicious fish-out-of-water heavy.

    And what makes it epic? The stakes. Circumstances lead the writer to give the money to a worthy cause and eventually sacrifice his life to save his friends from the enforcer’s wrath. Plus, the enforcer owes a debt of honour which demands he kill himself if he fails his mission.

    Truth be told, there’s a lot of genre-busting elements hard to include in a logline so I intend to include a short synopsis with any pitch.

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  3. Posted: May 23, 2013In:

    A man faces an unimaginable crisis when he discovers his new girlfriend –the daughter of a Voodoo queen– is a zombie.

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    I think it's usual not to use character names in a logline except if they are famous people or historical characters. How about this for the logline? A guy's (replace with a brief character description) worst nightmare comes true when he meets the woman of his dreams and she turns out to be a zombieRead more

    I think it’s usual not to use character names in a logline except if they are famous people or historical characters.

    How about this for the logline? A guy’s (replace with a brief character description) worst nightmare comes true when he meets the woman of his dreams and she turns out to be a zombie.

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